Laura Reyes
Joellen Hiltbrand
Engl-205, Sec. 8437
3 March 2019
Project
1: About a Shy Girl
Females
are very diverse. Some are loud, some are quiet. Some like to joke and some are
serious. Some get angry easily and some are bubbly and carefree. Some have a
lot of female friends and others prefer to hang with the guys. Some like to
dance, some like to chill. Some are social and some prefer to stay to
themselves. Some like to go out, while others prefer to stay in. Some like to
wear dresses and skirts and others prefer jeans and t-shirts. Some like high
heels, others like sneakers. Some are not into sports and others are. Some are
into makeup some have no clue on how to put makeup on. Some females have long hair,
and some have short hair. Some are tall and others are short. Some are curvy
and some are skinny. There are many ways to be a female. Ifapi, the female
character from “About the House Girl”, is a shy and sheltered female.
I
view Ifapi as being a shy girl. Ifapi would hide herself from the men that
visited her home. “…hid herself when young men came to the house” (Hicks et al.40).
Since Ifapi hid herself from the young men, this shows that she was shy. There
was an instance when Ifapi’s aunt invited Patapir in her house to eat. He then
seen Ifapi who was near the fire and she was covered in a deerskin blanket. She
did not move from the spot she was in while Patapir was there (Hicks et al.
41-42). It is obvious that Ifapi was avoiding Patapir. It is like she had a
blanket to cover her body as a way to not show how she really looked. She obviously did not want Patapir to see her
and she did not want to interact with him. This shows that she is shy. If she
was not shy, she would have found a way to interact with him, she could have
introduced herself to him and started a conversation and maybe even flirt.
Instead she barely joined the conversation that Patapir and her aunt were
having.
Ifapi’s
father viewed her as a fragile girl. He was very protective of her. Once Ifapi
was grown, her father did not set her up with a husband, instead he sent her
away to live with her aunt (Hicks et al. 40). This shows that Ifapi’s father
viewed her as fragile and did not want any man to break her heart. He was very
concerned for her well-being. Ifapi’s father must have been very knowledgeable
on the nature of men and new that men can be careless and not care about a
female’s feelings. There was another instance when Ifapi returned to her
father’s home after she had been living with her aunt. She introduced Patapir
as her husband to him. “Her father, sighed, speaking half to himself, half to
Ifapi, “‘Ahhh that old woman, my sister, she was not careless with you?’” (Hicks
et al. 47). This shows that Ifapi’s father was concerned about Ifapi. He wanted
to know that she was safe and happy. This was his way to ask Ifapi how she was
doing. Ifapi’s dad said, “’But then whom could you have married? I have heard
nothing of any man looking at you only that you were serving the Leader across
the ocean…’” (Hicks et al. 47). Ifapi’s father continues to question her. He
wants to know how Patapir came into the picture. He wants to know how Patapir
is her husband. He is worried because he did not hear anything about Patapir
before. The last thing he knows about Ifapi’s life was that she was serving the
leader. Ifapi’s father was out of the loop and is very concerned. He only wants
the best for his daughter and not want her to be with just any man.
Ifapi’s
aunt was very protective of her. One day Patapir went to Ifapi’s aunt’s house
to look for Ifapi. Ifapi’s aunt invited him in their home to eat some acorn
mush. Patapir seen Ifapi and patted her on her shoulder. Ifapi’s aunt noticed
and she shouted at him not to put his hands on Ifapi. Ifapi’s aunt was scared
for a man to get close to her. She did not know what intentions Patapir had for
her niece. That same day Patapir picked up Ifapi and as he was determined to
take her with him, Ifapi’s aunt told him that he has to ask permission from
Ifapi’s father (Hicks et al. 45-46). Ifapi’s aunt was worried for her niece to
leave with Patapir. This is obvious because she was trying to scare Patapir by
yelling at him so that he would leave Ifapi alone. She also demanded Patapir to
ask permission from Ifapi’s father to take her. This shows that Ifapi’s aunt views
Ifapi as fragile because she is very protective of her and does not want
anything bad to happen to Ifapi.
Patapir
was very intrigued by Ifapi. His mother often talked about Ifapi and her aunt
to him. He would ask questions about Ifapi but all she would say to him was
that she did not know much about her besides that she lives with her aunt and
that her aunt kept her away from men (Hicks et al. 40-41). “Patapir continued
to think about her, wondering what she was like, wising he might have a glimpse
of her” (Hicks et al. 41). This shows that Patapir was very obsessed with
knowing Ifapi. He was very into her since he could not stop himself from
thinking about her all the time. It is like this mystery of Ifapi was a magnet
to him. This is how a lot of men are in real life, they like the chase. The
harder it is to win a female, the more they put in effort and since Ifapi was
not easy for him to get to know, he was even more interested.
There
are many ways to be a female. Some females are loud, and others are quiet. Some
like to dance and others prefer to chill. Some have a lot of female friends and
others prefer to hang with the guys. Some are social, others prefer to stay to
themselves. Some get angry easily and some are bubbly and carefree. Some like
to go out, while others prefer to stay in. Some have long hair, and some have
short hair. Some are into makeup, some have no clue how to apply makeup. Ifapi
is a female that is shy and sheltered.
Work
Cited
Hicks, Jack, et al.
“About-the-House-Girl.” The Literature of
California. University of California Press,
2000. pp. 40-50.
Hello Laura, your argument and thesis is very clearly stated in the first paragraph and that made it very clear to understand the rest of your writing. Ifapi was a very sheltered girl, and you did a good job explaining that and giving reasons why she was like that. Her environment that she grew up in was definitely different than most girls, and you also explained that well. This is all our first project so I think you did a good job to start. One thing that you could add onto your writing is your personal opinion of Ifapi. Do you think its weird that she is the way she is or is it normal? Just something to add on a little but overall I think you did a great job.
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